Writing is a process that doesn’t end when the first draft is completed. It requires careful revision, refinement, and constructive feedback. Self-editing and peer feedback are crucial stages in developing a polished piece of creative writing.
In this lecture, we will explore techniques for effective self-editing and strategies for giving and receiving peer feedback to enhance our writing skills.
Part 1: Self-Editing
Self-editing is the process of reviewing and refining your own work before seeking external feedback. This part ensures that your writing is clear, coherent, and engaging.
- Identify and improve weak plot points (in fiction) or unclear arguments (in essays).
- Ensure logical flow and coherence between paragraphs.
- Check for consistency in tone, style, and point of view.
- Avoid redundant phrases (e.g., "advance planning" → "planning").
- Replace weak verbs with strong, precise ones. For instance, instead of "She was walking slowly," use "She strolled."
- Check grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
Part 2: Peer Feedback
Peer feedback provides fresh perspectives and helps identify blind spots in writing. Learning to give and receive feedback constructively is essential for growth as a writer.
When you are going to give feedback, always be specific. Instead of saying, “This is confusing,” specify what is unclear and suggest improvements. For this purpose, use Sandwich Method (a positive comment, a critique with suggestion for improvement, and encouragement). Avoid harsh criticism and use polite words. For instance, instead of saying “This part is boring”, say “The pacing slows in this section; consider tightening the dialogue." Remember, deeper feedback on character development, theme, and clarity is more valuable.
When you are going to receive feedback, always stay open minded, ask for clarification and decide what works for you. Feedback helps improve your writing. If a suggestion is unclear, discuss it with your peer. Not all feedback needs to be implemented. Consider what aligns with your vision for the piece.
Self-editing and peer feedback are vital to improving creative writing. By refining our work independently and embracing constructive criticism from peers, we develop stronger, more engaging narratives. Writing is a craft that thrives on revision and external insight. The more we edit and engage with feedback, the more polished and compelling our work will become.